Today was the screening of our title sequences which consisted of each group showing their work to the class after which we provided feedback on what we had seen. From this feedback we received very mixed opinions as some thought the elliptical editing worked well and others weren't so keen thus we decided to edit out some of the editing and leave clips as they were originally. We also reduced the clips of writing as we felt it was to repetitive and the class appear to agree.
The main positive we received was on the music and the titles which we were happy to hear about as this was our favorite aspect of the title sequence and because of this we felt nothing needed to be changed apart from some minor spelling errors.
the narrative seemed slightly obscure to the audience from what we could tell and from this feedback we realized that it wasn't entirely clear due to the writing sometimes lacking what is it suppose to portray. To improve on this we only inserted clips into the sequence which made it obvious it was a funeral speech for our protagonists nan. This change also allowed the repetition to be decreased and made it more exciting thus emphasizing the action genre more.
overall we have found this feedback to be extremely useful as it has allowed us to work into the flaws of our title sequence which has included the editing, when the cuts occur and the order of the clips.
